For fiction publishers tired of fixing the same scenes over and over

Spend Less Time Reworking Scenes
and Get Back to Finishing Books You Can Sell

10 practical AI fiction hacks to help you find what's missing, choose a useful fix, and move your manuscript closer to publication—without handing over your voice.

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Dear fellow publisher,

Your next book can't earn royalties while it's sitting in your drafts folder.

But “just finish it” isn't particularly useful advice when you're staring at a scene you know doesn't work.

So you reopen it.

Rewrite the opening. Tweak the conversation. Ask AI to improve it.

Now you have three versions, another page of suggestions, and the same bloody problem.

Meanwhile, the rest of the book is still waiting.

You Sat Down to Move the Book Forward.
Somehow, You're Still Here.

Perhaps the scene takes too long to get going.

Perhaps the dialogue sounds perfectly reasonable, but nothing interesting happens between the people saying it.

Perhaps your character makes a decision you need for the next chapter, and even you don't quite believe it.

You can feel the problem. You just haven't found the change that would solve it.

That's where a writing session can disappear.

A different opening sentence. A longer description. Another attempt to make the conversation “more emotional.”

You've done the work. Spent the time. Ended the evening with something different from what you started with.

But has the manuscript moved forward?

When you're trying to build a publishing business around a job, a family, or an already crowded day, that's an expensive question to keep answering with “not really.”

Your available writing time is limited.

The book still needs finishing.

And you don't want to rush weak scenes into publication just to say you're done.

AI Was Supposed to Help You Save Time

So you ask it to make the scene better.

It rewrites the whole thing.

There are more adjectives. The characters explain their feelings with remarkable precision. Your restrained detective now sounds as though he's been preparing a keynote speech about vulnerability.

You spot something you might use.

Then you start removing the invented backstory, fixing the voice, and putting the character back together.

Congratulations. Your shortcut has developed a second editing job.

The more useful approach is to narrow the question.

Where does the scene actually become interesting?

What does each person want from this conversation?

What would make this particular character choose that option now?

Now you're looking for a decision you can use. Something specific enough to help you write the next version with a reason behind it.

That's the job of 10 AI Fiction Hacks.

Ten Shortcuts Through
the Scenes That Keep Holding You Up

10 AI Fiction Hacks is a practical PDF guide with copyable prompts and worked examples for ten recognizable fiction problems.

You choose the problem in front of you. Supply your scene or a short description. Try the prompt and decide what belongs in your book.

You might find a stronger place to begin. Give a conversation competing priorities. Make a character's decision believable. Or realize that an existing scene only needs a few changed lines.

The aim is to spend less time wondering what to try—and more time making useful progress toward publication.

You can keep every sentence of the final writing in your own voice.

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Sometimes the Fix Is Smaller Than
the Rewrite You Were About to Start

Here's an invented example from the guide.

Nessa is a detective. Her brother is missing. A parcel containing her spare key arrives at the station.

The original scene begins:

Nessa arrived at the station just after eight. She put her coat behind the door and went to make coffee. She was still thinking about the last argument she'd had with her brother. A parcel was waiting beside the machine.

You could spend another pass polishing the arrival, the coffee, and the memory of the argument.

The first hack helps you consider a more useful question: where does this scene give the reader a reason to pay attention?

One revised opening looks like this:

The crooked tooth caught Nessa's thumb as she tipped the key out of the envelope. Her brother had complained about that tooth every time he used it. Two weeks missing, and he'd somehow found time to return her spare. The coffee machine clicked behind her. She turned the key over. Someone had cleaned it.

The change is the entry point.

The situation is still yours. The key and its details come from the example's supplied facts. You haven't rebuilt the plot or commissioned a replacement chapter.

You've found a clearer way into the scene.

That's the kind of useful decision that can let you stop circling a passage and get back to the book.

Pick the Problem That's
Costing You Time Today

The ten hacks work independently. You don't have to complete a course before you can use the one you need.

1. Find a stronger place to start. Before you rewrite the opening again, explore where the scene should begin. Keep necessary context while getting to the moment that matters.

2. Give both characters something to want. Find the competing priorities that give a conversation somewhere to go. Spend your revision effort on the exchange itself instead of decorating dialogue that still has no purpose.

3. Put meaning underneath the dialogue. Explore how an invitation, refusal, or ordinary question can carry the feeling you've been trying to explain. You may need a better exchange rather than another paragraph about emotions.

4. Borrow a song's emotional pressure. Try an unfamiliar emotional situation with a character who keeps giving you predictable responses. Keep the useful discovery even if you discard the entire exploratory scene.

5. Turn a discovery into something that happens. Find a place where an insight can improve an existing scene. A small change to an action or choice may save you from adding a whole new scene to explain it.

6. Make the setting matter. Use the place to affect privacy, timing, or what someone is willing to say. Give the description a practical job before you spend another pass making it longer.

7. Get closer to the viewpoint character. Find what this particular person would notice, interpret, or do. Work on the detail that brings the moment closer instead of endlessly searching for a stronger word than “nervous.”

8. Make a difficult choice believable. Explore what each option protects and costs. Find a credible reason for the decision so the following chapter has a firmer foundation.

9. Earn a change in behavior. Look for preparation in scenes you already have. Help a later response feel earned without automatically rebuilding the character's entire history.

10. Give the reader a reason to continue. Find the consequence or expectation your scene has created. You may already have the right ending buried underneath the explanation that follows it.

Choose one. Use it where it helps. Continue writing.

You Also See How to Stop an
Unhelpful Answer Becoming More Work

A prompt is only useful if you can do something with the response.

Each hack includes a worked example showing the input, a possible response, and the writer's choice. You then see the revised passage or usable direction that comes out of it.

That includes rejecting suggestions.

A secret debt that changes the story unnecessarily? Leave it out.

A reserved character suddenly explaining her entire psychology? Correct it.

A small change that improves the scene while preserving its purpose? Keep it and move on.

The examples use invented characters and illustrative responses. They demonstrate the decisions rather than promise that an AI tool will always give the same answer.

You also get follow-up prompts for generic advice, invented facts, wrong character behavior, and unwanted rewriting.

The point is to get help with your manuscript without creating another pile of material you now have to fix.

Your Book Still Needs
to Be Worth Reading

Finishing matters. So does what the reader finds when they open it.

A sharper opening can invite them into a scene. A believable choice can keep them with a character. An ending with something unsettled can make the next chapter more appealing.

Those are practical things to work on in a book you're asking people to buy.

You want a manuscript you can finish and put in front of readers with confidence. You also want to give those readers reasons to remember your fiction and look for your next title.

These hacks help you work on that reading experience while keeping the revision focused.

You make the choices. You decide when the change fits. You return to the rest of the book.

Here's What You Get

The complete purchase is one 27-page PDF containing:

• Ten practical fiction hacks, organized around problems you can recognize in your own writing.

• Ten copyable main prompts, with clear places for your passage, scene, and character details.

• Ten worked examples, showing what gets kept, corrected, or rejected—and what the writing becomes afterward.

• Five additional prompts to help correct unhelpful responses.

• Clickable contents and a quick return list, so you can open the relevant technique when you need it.

Keep it beside your draft. Come back when another scene needs attention.

You'll need access to an AI chat tool to use the prompts. This purchase is the PDF guide; no software is included.

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A Few Questions Before You Decide

Will this write an entire book for me?

This guide focuses on specific scene problems and writing decisions. You bring a passage or a short description, use the relevant hack, and choose what to change. It gives you tools to help move the manuscript forward; it isn't a complete book-production system.

Can I use it on fiction I've written myself?

Yes. You can ask for possibilities and write every sentence of the revision yourself. You don't have to replace your passage with AI-generated prose.

What if I'm still planning the scene?

Supply a short description and the important character facts. Several hacks help you explore actions, choices, and preparation before you draft the prose.

Do I need to learn prompt engineering?

The main prompts are written for you. Replace the brackets with your material. The examples show what to supply and how to handle suggestions that miss.

Is it restricted to a particular genre?

The techniques address scene problems across fiction. The examples include mystery, fantasy, relationships, and suspense. You preserve the tone, viewpoint, and character behavior that fit your book.

Do I need another FictionHacks product?

No. All ten techniques are complete in this guide, including the song-based character exploration. Other products are mentioned as optional ways to develop particular approaches further.

How does it help me save time?

It gives you a specific question to ask, a prompt to use, and an example of what to do with the answer. That helps you focus a revision on the problem you're trying to solve. You can choose a useful change instead of requesting another general rewrite and sorting through everything that comes back.

Get Back to the Book
You Want to Publish

You already know there is more to earning royalties than putting words in a document.

But you also know that you need a book you can actually put in front of readers.

Every time a scene stops you, you have a choice about how to approach it.

You can use one of these hacks to explore what's missing, choose a useful change, and continue with a clearer idea of what you're doing.

Keep your voice. Keep control of the story.

Give yourself a practical way through the scenes that keep bringing you back to the same page.

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Due to the nature of this offer ALL SALES ARE FINAL!

Sincerely,

Mike Nielsen

P.S. Your next book can't earn royalties while it stays in your drafts folder. Choose one scene that's holding you up, use the relevant hack, and start moving it toward the book you want to publish.

P.P.S. You don't have to use a single sentence the AI writes. A better question, a more believable choice, or a stronger place to start can be enough to help you write the change yourself.

P.P.P.S. The price increases by $0.05 after every three sales. The button shows the current price. Get the complete guide now and put it beside the manuscript you've been meaning to get back to.